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Rabu, 25 September 2013

My Experience


My Experience
Well, I want to introduce myself. My name is Aulia Fransischa, please call me Sischa. After I graduated from my senior high school, I continued my study as an english student in Universitas Negeri Padang. Before I ask you about my goal to write this essay, I want to tell you that I think is the most important to us. You know, to write a paragraph and essay is not easier. If we want to write some paragraphs and an essay must be pay attention about the grammar, punctuation and we must be pay attention to the spelling, because it is the most important things when we wrote it. From this things,  I had an experienced that I never to forgot it.
After I finished to study in semester 1, I continued to study in semester 2. I learned much lessons especially writing 1. When I studied writing 1, I felt happy because I studied with two lecturers; they are Mr. Saunir and Mr. Hafiz. They move into teached about the same topics at the different time. I studied with Mr. Saunir on Tuesday and with Mr. Hafiz on Monday. They gave us much motivation, especially for myself. I thought Mr. Hafiz explained the lessons seriously, but I never felt boring studied with him. He always gave his students an assignment after he gave a topic. I felt happy because it made me understand. On the other hand, studied with Mr. Saunir gave me  different feeling. He never allowed his students enter to the class if they came late, but I never came late. Both of them, Mr. Saunir and Mr. Hafiz explained the same topic, it is about how to make a description paragraph, paragraph and essay, cause and effect, report and others. At first, I thought it was ok, but I had a problem when I wrote an essay. I did not understand about it because I used to learn the basics of writing like putting together sentences, forming paragraphs with sentences, and things like that in senior high school. I always studied at home, my boarding house, to improve my skills on it. I always remember that his said,”in this class, you must be on time, you want to “Kuliah or Takziah”. I laughed whenever I heared that, but it is a gold lesson to me.

It was my experience in the last semester, which can make me more understand in writing until now. I get much gold lessons after I studied writing 1 and thanks to Mr. Saunir and Mr. Hafiz. I believe, one day I can write essay and others well. I can be a good and favorite teacher like Mr. Saunir, because I want to make my parents happy. I do not want to make them feel dissapointed. Thanks to God who had because gave me many lessons in my life.

9 komentar:

  1. Sischa,, I like your story,, :)
    it will better if you change this sentence "Well, I want to introduce myself. My name is Aulia Fransischa, please call me Sischa." or use another word because in this essay you'll talk about your experience

    BalasHapus
  2. That's great story siska...But I think you should pay more attention to your diction... keep writing!!

    BalasHapus
  3. this is nice story aulia,,:) pay attention for the punctuation !

    BalasHapus
  4. That is great experience Sischa, but I think there are too many "I".

    BalasHapus
  5. Nice essay, but you should pay attention about the choice of words.

    BalasHapus
  6. After I read it I agree with Esi, you should pay attention about the choice of words.
    Good essay, Sischa.

    BalasHapus